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Date: 2023-09-25 06:45 pm (UTC)Just kidding, I do like this! I think Nick leaving is the only way to reasonably resolve the N&N situation. I did really like Natalie's little experiment with her blood. It brought it from the abstract to the concrete for her. Finally, she can comprehend what he's talking about. I did like her fear of him at the hospital--very realistic. I'm on the fence about Nick wiping her memory. It is such a horrible violation to take all that away from her, but I'm not sure she would recover with her memories of Nick still intact.
I liked Nick's relationship with LaCroix here. Much less animosity and a genuine exchange between them. I can easily see them renewing their relationship after this on much better terms.
And I enjoyed the way Tracy finds out about Nick. She deserved to know, and I liked the scene with Vachon and Urs. Nicely done!
Thanks for sharing.